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I like this poem and it flows quite well. However I do believe it is lacking a bit of something. Possibly content or maybe just innapropriate wording!! Keep trying and ...

I really like this poem, I am also new. I like what you have done here. The content and structure I believe seems adequate, it kept me reading until the ...

You have made some really interesting points here and I think most of the content is adequate, maybe you just need to rethink some structural parts such as: I'm not ...

I understood where you were coming from in this poem and that was good idea just not very original!! Was this poem about you or another? No-one will understand. Yes ...

Love this, The rhyme is great and the idea is great!! I really cant criticise this 1 at all but absolutely love it!!! Dofs...

I like this, and I am sure many readers understand where you are coming from I am in full agreeance with not wanting love!!! I also want to be alone, ...

This has worked out well considering it is not your typical style! However I must agree it did not flow smootly in parts. An obvious stutter is the link or ...

Well I think this was not too bad.. You put accross an idea and I do understand where it is coming from. However this is life and this is everything ...

Love this 1!! Wow, how true that is!!! You read my shit, it's worst than it seems, I got true friends, fuck a drug team. Love those lines, not to ...

Like this 1 also, I think its good you included 50, makes your message clear and everybody knows who he is!!! Love this style of rap Well done Dofs...

I liked this, as the other girls said, I was reading this as though it was on the radio!! I like it, i'm not massive on rap but when I ...

This Is a really good poem, the emotion in it kept me reading!! Alot of people have felt this way at one or more points in their lives. Although this ...

You walked away as a small boy would, You did not have to stand where I stood, You left all of your problems ina burning fire, You portrayed me as ...

I don't believe in god, I disagree with the way it works The good die young, the bad live forever My attitude, my morals belong to me, only me Its ...

I think this is a great, emotion filled poem!!! You have mixed the repetition up and this makes it flow better. Love this, well done. Doffa...